English 111G, Section 40
Call # 3017471
Summer Session II, 2004
Professor McNeel

NEW MEXICO STATE UNIVERSITY AT ALAMOGORDO
Syllabus for ENGL 111G, Rhetoric & Composition, Section 40
Summer Session II, 2004:  June 30-August 10
CB 704 & CB 402, English Computer Lab
6:45-9:00 P.M., M Tu W Th

Mr. Ron McNeel
Professor of English


In Case of Emergency In Case of HAFB Closure Classroom Conduct & Plagiarism Course Description & Prerequisites
Course Objectives Grading Instructor Contact Info. Course Schedule
Outcomes Assessment Attendance Texts and Materials Classroom and ADA Policies


NMSU-A Mission Statement
The mission of the Alamogordo Branch of New Mexico State University, a comprehensive community college, is to
•    provide quality education that includes academic, technical, vocational, developmental, and career-oriented skills;
•    promote student competence, confidence, and success by providing personal enrichment programs through continued response to the cultural, intellectual, and economic needs of the community;
•    maintain active ties and continuity with the main campus;
•    afford equal opportunity for individuals who meet admission criteria to receive educational services within the community without regard to age, ancestry, color, disability, gender, national origin, religion, sexual orientation, or veteran status.

In Case of Emergency
If someone in your family needs to contact you in an emergency, the person calling should know the class you are attending and use the following telephone numbers:
  Alamogordo Campus:
   Daytime:  439-3700 (Admissions Office)
   Evening:  439-3751 (Faculty Office Secretary)

 
In Case of Holloman Air Force Base Closure
National or international events may cause Holloman Air Force Base to close, keeping students from leaving the base to attend classes on campus, and keeping instructors from entering the base to teach classes there.  To alleviate the problems a closure would cause,
• the instructor may collect student phone numbers and email addresses;
• the instructor may use email addresses to create a distribution list to keep students up-to-date on assignments and activities;
• students should note the instructor’s email address and be adept at sending word-processed assignments as attachments via computer;
• instructors and students may need to mutually agree on a make-up class or classes, times, places, and modes of instruction (including email or chat room discussions), in order to abide by state requirements of 750 minutes of class time per credit hour.

Classroom Conduct
• You are not allowed to use tobacco products in classrooms at NMSU-A or HAFB.
• You are not allowed to eat or drink in computer classrooms at NMSU-A, or any classrooms at HAFB.
• Any student engaging in disruptive behavior will be required to leave the class.

Plagiarism and Academic Dishonesty
In an effort to fulfill our mission to “maintain active ties and continuity with the main campus at Las Cruces,” the following statement on plagiarism and academic dishonesty is taken from Paideia IV: A Course Guide for English 111 Composition and Rhetoric, edited by Rebecca Blackwell and Gina Hochhalter, published for the NMSU-Las Cruces Department of English by Outernet Publishing, 2002.

 It is academically dishonest, and often illegal, to present someone else’s ideas or writing as your own.  You cannot use even short phrases or parts of sentences obtained from other sources unless you properly document those sources.  Documentation includes marking quotations, as well as providing notes, citations, and a reference list.  If you receive assistance from a source other than your instructor, your colleagues in the class, or the Writing Center, then you must acknowledge that assistance.  Identify the source and the nature of the assistance in an acknowledgment note at the end of the assignment.  Failure to acknowledge constitutes academic misconduct.
 In addition, it is academically dishonest to submit your own previously written work for a current assignment or to submit an assignment in more than one class without the prior permission of the instructors.
 You will be held responsible for furnishing upon request all the sources and preliminary work (notes, rough drafts, etc.) that you use when preparing written assignments.  If you cannot produce that material upon request, the assignment will be considered unsatisfactory and given a failing grade.
 Plagiarism and academic misconduct of any kind may constitute grounds for failing the course and may result in further disciplinary action according to university policy.  Consult the . . . [NMSU-A] Student Handbook regarding your responsibilities and rights concerning plagiarism and academic dishonesty.  In addition, writing textbooks contain useful discussions of plagiarism.
 As a student, you are responsible for protecting your own work.  It is your responsibility to ensure that other students do not copy your work or submit your work as their own.  Allowing your work to be used inappropriately makes you guilty of academic misconduct and subject to sanctions. (xi)

NMSU-A English Department Goal
The goal of the English Department of New Mexico State University at Alamogordo is to provide a curriculum of comprehensive, post-secondary education in English in a local environment to meet the diverse and lifelong needs of those students who
a) need developmental instruction in English,
b) intend to transfer to other institutions of higher learning,
c) enroll in technical, vocational, certificate, or associate degree programs, or
d) seek personal enrichment through the formal study of the English language and its literature.

Catalog Description for ENGL 111G, Rhetoric and Composition
Skills and methods used in writing university-level essays.

Prerequisites
To qualify for admission into this class, you must have

ENGL 111G Objectives
(as revised in the February 18th, 2000 meeting of writing program instructors)

In order to promote students’ academic success and to enable them to pursue personal and professional goals involving writing and research skills, the objectives of this course are to prepare students to

We will achieve these objectives through lecture, exercises, peer group workshops, instructor-student conferencing, reading assignments, and discussion. Other students will be reading and responding to your writing this semester.

Outcomes Assessment: Objectives, Methods, and Standards

The NMSU-A writing program assesses students’ writing products and processes separately from grade evaluation.  We do this to measure how well our writing courses carry out our established objectives.  Results of assessment projects will be used to revise the curriculum, both at the instructor level and at the program level.  The ultimate goal of assessment is to satisfy the needs of the students and the university’s mission.

Typical assignments that may be collected for assessment projects include, but are not limited to, the following:
• Writing samples taken at the beginning of the year
• Early semester essays
• Late semester essays
• annotated bibliographies
• portfolios demonstrating achievement
• portfolios demonstrating proof of process
• research papers

 For some assignments, such as the research paper assignment, students will be asked to submit two copies: one with identifying information, and one without identifying information.  Selected assignments will then be reviewed anonymously.  For program assessment, instructors will not be identified.  Individual instructors may be identified for their own purposes to assess their section-specific objectives.  However, results of program-wide assessment projects will only be reported for the entire program, not for individual students, sections, or instructors.

Because of staff limitations, only a random sampling of student papers will be reviewed.  If students do not want their work considered for random selection, they must notify the Humanities Coordinator in writing before the fifth week of the semester.

The random samplings will be reviewed according to generally accepted assessment practices in the field of rhetoric.  Most commonly, this practice will involve primary trait analysis using a 4 or 6 point scale.  But it may also involve the identification of the presence or absence of an attribute essential to meeting a course objective.  Or, another method may be a holistic review of an essay assignment or portfolio.

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Grading Matters

Changes in grading matters may be made with the approval of all students affected by the changes.
 
 
Grade Worth Assignments:  All Assignments will have handouts and/or instructions.
25 points Essay #1 Recalling an Experience (Narrative, Expressive) 3-5 pages. BG Chapters 4, 5,  selected readings in 23
25 points Essay #2  Issues of Work (Argumentative), 3-5 pages.  BG Chapters 6, 9, 10,  selected readings in 24 & 26
25 points Essay #3 Writing about Popular Culture, 3-5 pages.  BG Chapters 7, 8, 9, 12, 22, 25.
25 points Essay #4,  3-5 pages. Topic and readings to be determined.
25 points Various quizzes & exercises as assigned, almost daily
25 points First reading response journal submission.  BG, Chapters 1, 2, 3, 12, 16.
25 points Second reading response journal submission.  BG, Chapters 1, 2, 3, 12, 16.
50 points Exit Essay, 2-3 pages.  BG Chapters 9, 15.
25 points Annotated Bibliography, 2 pages.  BG Chapters 11, 12, 21, 28, 29, 30
125 points Research Paper, 6-8 pages.  BG, All of Writer's Research Manual section
125 points Portfolio with  substantially revised essays and polished journal entries. BG, Chapter 20, plus your own texts.
500 Points Total

Grades: 500-450= A; 449-400= B; 399-350= C; 349-300= D; Below 300 = F


Attendance Policy

20 bonus points are possible for attendance.  However, since bonus points are possible for attendance, there are NO EXCUSED ABSENCES, except for authorized University functions, as provided for in the Student Handbook. Also, absences and tardies may eventually cost you points, and therefore semester grades, thus:
 
 
+1 point for each class, up to 20; 
excludes first day, conference days, final exam
-10 points for each absence -5 points for each tardy

It may be possible for students to get credit for attending by entering into our class discussions and class work via email:  emailing journal responses on readings, emailing drafts as attachments if students cannot physically attend the class.



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ENGLISH 111G, RHETORIC & COMPOSITION
 
 
Instructor Contact Information

Mr. Ron McNeel 
Professor of English 
Office #115, Faculty Office Building 
Office Hours, Summer Session II, 2004:
Mon. Tue, Wed., Thur: 2:30-4:30 p.m.

Phone and voice mail: 505.439.3742 

email: mcneel@nmsua.nmsu.edu
website: http://alamo.nmsu.edu/~rmcneel
 

Required Texts and Materials
  • The Bedford Guide for College Writers (BG), 6th edition
  • A Pocket Style Manual, 3rd ed. (PSM)
  • A good dictionary
  • An NMSU-A computer account and/or internet access and an email address
  • Access to reliable word-processing equipment
  • 2-3 floppy disks
  • A spiral notebook with pockets for journal-keeping
  • 2-3 letter-sized manila folders
  • A medium three-ring notebook with loose-leaf filler paper and dividers


TENTATIVE COURSE SCHEDULE

If changes to the schedule are necessary, I will do my best to announce them in advance. However, occasionally minor changes may occur at the beginning of a class session. Major changes to the syllabus will be made in writing and handed out as an addendum to the syllabus, and/or posted at the syllabus website.

Reading assignments are to be completed before the date on which they are scheduled for discussion. If a lack of discussion and preparation indicate that the selections have not been read, then I may give unannounced quizzes over the day's readings.



Week 1
 
Session # and Dates Assignments and Activities
1.  Wed., June 30  Introduction to the course:  "The Rules We Play By." Books and registration matters.
Assignment of the journal. Overview of the field of rhetoric. Ungraded, sample essay writing
2.  Thurs., July 1 Discussion of Part One, Introduction and Chapters 1, 2, 3, & 16 in BG.  (About 35 pages).
Connections made between reading processes and writing processes. 
Introduction of Handbooks, BG and PSM.  Assignment of Essay #1, Recalling an experience. 

Monday, July 5: Independence Day Holiday
Classes will meet Friday, July 9, to make up for this Holiday

Wednesday, July 7:  Deadline for Registration & Course Addition

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Week 2
 
Session # and Dates Assignments and Activities
3.  Tue., July 6 Return of ungraded writing samples.  Chapter 4 in BG:  Recalling an experience. Review of Chapter 16 in BG.  
In-class invention:  generating ideas.  Discussion of selected readings in Chapter 23.  Chapter 12 in BG.
4.  Wed., July 7 Chapter 5 in BG:  Observing a Scene.  Chapters17 & 18, Planning and Drafting.  Discussion of selected readings in Chapter 23.
5.  Thurs, July 8
Chapters 19 & 20 in BG.  Modeling of Peer Review.
6.  Friday, July 9
Peer Reviews of Essay 1.

Week 3
 
Session # and Dates Assignments and Activities
7. Mon., July 12
Essay 1 is due at the beginning of class.  Assignment of Essay 2, Issues in the Workplace.
 BG Chapters 6 & 7.  Review of Chapter 16. Selected Readings in Chapter 26 of BG.
8. Tue., July 13
BG Chapters 9 & 10.  Review of Chapters 17 & 18. Selected readings in Chapter 26 of BG.
 Research Paper Topic is due.   Beginning of Research with Chapter 28 in BG.  Assignment of Annotated Bibliography.
9. Wed., July 14
Review of Chapters 19 & 20. Peer Reviews of Essay 2.
10. Thur., July 15
  Assignment of Essay 3, Writing about Popular Culture.  BG, Chapter 8. Selected Readings from BG, Chapter 25.

Week 4

Tuesday, July 20:  Last Day to Drop individual courses with a grade of W


 
Session # and Dates Assignments and Activities
11, Mon., July 19
 Essay #2 is due at the beginning of class.  Continuation of Research with BG Chapter 29.
Continuation of Assignment of Essay #3 with review of Chapters 12, 16, 17, 18, 19, Selected Readings from Chapter 25.
12, Tue., July 20
 Submission of First Reading Response Journal.  Peer Reviews of Essay #3.
  Individual Conferences on Essays 1 & 2, and journals.
13. Wed., July 21
 Continuation of Research with Chapters 30 & 32 in BG.  Time for Research.  Library tour.  Assignment of Essay #4, Topic to be determined.
14.  Thur., July 22
Annotated Bibliographies are Due.  Discussion of Selected Readings from Chapters 23 & 27, and possibly reserve readings.

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Week 5

 
Session # and Dates Assignments and Activities
15. Mon., July 26
 Essay #3 is due.  Research & Library time.
16.Tu, July 27
Peer Reviews of Essay #4.  Review of Chapters 19 and 20 in BG.
17. W, July 28
Individual Conferences on Research Papers.
You must bring a 5 page draft  to this conference or risk losing 25 of the possible 125 points for this assignment.
18.Th, July 29
Submission of Second Reading Response Journal.  Individual Conferences on Research Papers.
You must bring a 5 page draft to this conference or risk losing 25 of the possible 125 points for this assignment.

Week 6

Tuesday, August 3:  Last Day to Withdraw From the University

 
Session # and Dates Assignments and Activities
19. Mon., Aug. 2 Essay #4 is due.  Return of journals, annotated bibliographies.  Research & writing time.
20. Tue., Aug. 3
Last lecture and activities on research:  BG Chapters 28-32.  Research & writing time.
21.  Wed., Aug. 4
 Return of Essay #4. Portfolio Preparation.
22. Thur., Aug. 5
Research Papers are due.  Chapter 15 in BG, Writing for Assessment.  Workshop Session for Exit Essay.

Week 7

 
Session # and Dates Assignments and Activities
23. Mon., Aug. 9   Exit Essay. Portfolios are Due.  Sign up for individual conferences for the return of portfolios. Course wrap-up and evaluation.
24. Tue., Aug. 10  Individual Conferences on portfolios, research papers.

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CLASSROOM, ATTENDANCE, AND GRADING POLICIES

1. The University administration and the U.S. Air Force insist that you do not smoke, eat, or drink in the classrooms--especially computer  laboratories.

2. I insist that you attend class: excessive absences will adversely affect your final semester grade, as explained in attendance and grading policies above.

3. Chronic tardiness will also affect your final grade. If you do come in late, just take a seat quietly in the row of desks nearest the door. This row is to be set aside for this purpose. Please don't walk in front of me.

4. If you have a serious and legitimate reason for missing class, I will discuss the possibility of your making up your work, provided that you see me as soon as you return.

5. No matter the reason or excuse, all late papers will lose 10% of the possible points for the assignment. No assignments will be accepted after Session 20, August 3.  Please consider emailing assignments as attachments to get them in on time.

6. Work that is missed and not made up, or make-up work that I will not accept, will receive a grade of zero.

7. If you plagiarize a paper or cheat on a test, you will be urged to drop the course. Also, you will receive a zero grade on the falsified assignment.

8. A plagiarized research paper is sufficient cause for failure in the course. I reserve the right to ask for all your pre-final draft materials, such as your note cards or photocopied notes and your rough drafts--paper or electronic--before agreeing to grade your research paper, or any essay.

9. IF YOU DO NOT HAVE A FOUR TO SIX PAGE DRAFT OF YOUR RESEARCH PAPER AT YOUR SCHEDULED INDIVIDUAL CONFERENCE, THE RESEARCH PAPER WILL BE DOCKED 25 POINTS.

ADA Statement


If you have (or believe you have) a disability and would benefit from classroom accommodation(s), please contact the Office of Special Student Services located in the George Fettinger Student Services Building (phone: 439-3720).
If you have a condition that may affect your ability to exit safely from the premises in an emergency or that may cause an emergency during class, you are encouraged to discuss any concerns with the instructor.

Student Responsibilities:

  1. Register with Special Student Services and obtain accommodation documents early in the semester;
  2. Deliver the completed accommodation and testing form(s) to the instructor(s) within the first two weeks of beginning of classes (or within one week of the date services are to commence);
  3. Retrieve the signed form(s) from faculty and return to SSD within five (5) days of receipt from faculty and at least one week before any scheduled exam; and,
  4. Contact the Special Student Services Office if the services/accommodations requested are not being provided, not meeting your needs, or if additional accommodations are needed. Do not wait until you receive a failing grade. Retroactive accommodations cannot be considered.

Faculty Responsibilities:

  1. Sign the ACCOMMODATION REQUEST FORM and TESTING ACCOMMODATION FORM (when presented), retain a copy, and return the original to the student within five (5) working days of receipt;
  2. Contact Special Student Services immediately if there are any questions or disputes regarding accommodation(s), disruptive behavior, etc.; and,
  3. Refer the student to Special Student Services for any additional accommodations.

Contacts:

Accommodations: Kathy Fuller (439-3720), Special Student Services Counselor (George Fettinger Student Services Building)
ADA Coordinator: Doris Lynch (439-3716), Campus Student Services Officer (George Fettinger Student Services Building)
Discrimination: Angela Velasco(646-3333), Interim Director EEO/ADA & Employee Relations (Hadley Hall, Room 15 NMSU)

All medical information will be treated confidentially

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